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Fatal Impeachment: a 25-year-old case
Story and photos by Sunshine Sheltray Wayne Beyea doesn't just write stories on investigations. In addition to supervising an investigative unit during a 25-year career in the New York State Police, he was also a Juvenile Justice Coordinator in Clinton County, New York, in 2000; he knows what he's talking about. Two years prior, he also joined up with Writers Club Press to write a tale of rape and murder in New York: Fatal Impeachment. Even the title draws you in. On the cover, there's a photo of the White House and a flag flapping in the breeze splattered with blood. This caught my eye on the shelves of a local bookstore; though this book isn't one that would ordinarily catch my eye. I usually prefer to read fantasy, but a good murder mystery isn't bad. When I flipped open the book, it wasn't the first line—"A tenacious young State Police Investigator develops circumstantial evidence identifying a suspect in a rape/murder case."—that caught me. It was the second: "Incredibly, that suspect is the President of the United States." Wow!
A female college student was raped and murdered 25 years ago, and the murderer was not discovered. Her body was found with her claddagh earrings piercing her nipples. The story is written from the perspective of two different detectives who work on a police force in Middletown, New York. When the investigator in charge at the start of the story is murdered after a new suspect is found, Lieutenant Richard Miranda takes over. Grammatically and stylistically, this story isn't written well. There is no constant story format in Fatal Impeachment, and the sentences all run together in very long paragraphs. Some of the paragraphs go on for so long that a person can feel their eyes cross as they read. But that isn't all that will cause eyes to cross—this book is full of run-on paragraphs, so long that at times that you don't know which character is talking at which point. Littered throughout the book is unnecessary information. One of the chapters in the book is just about the officer's life. It explains how he decided to be a policeman over a firefighter and then goes on through his life in school and college, and even through his failed marriage. This is an important character, but information on his upbringing and his marriage just aren't relevant to the story. The concept of the story itself is good, however.
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Fatal Impeachment, Writer's Club Press, 1998
Ode to a Stone Erupting from the bowels of the earth eons ago, He is naked, grey, lifeless, forlorn, Tis a countenance washed by thousands of showers, He retains the appearance of strength and youth The greenish grey lichens of old age cling The mossy fungus adorning his shoulders Microscopic examination of his features They cavort neath his belly and crawl on his back, Though massive indeed and seeming obtuse, He is a bulwark against soil erosion Tis true this magnificent obelisk The grey of his granite face doth belie, Whether it does is of no importance to me, |
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